In the past 4 years, I’ve cut my teeth strategizing & writing award-worthy, revenue-increasing, results-snatching copy. And what really lights my fire is writing for woman-owned and BIPOC-led brands. I’m talkin’ the first day after a braiding appointment type of excited! Energizing them to go big with their bold ideas so that when launch time happens, the world thinks “OMG FINALLY, I’ve been waiting for something like this.” And giving them the tools to diversify the market.
Here’s a statistic to ruffle your feathers: 90% of startups will fail (thanks for the fear mongering, Forbes). And while there can be a lot of reasons why that happens, there’s one potential reason I want to focus on in this blog post: bad copywriting.
There’s so much power in good copy. It can:
But when your copy:
And when you:
You wind up risking falling into that 90% nail in the coffin. So let’s fix that! Here’s some copywriting 101 for the startup founder who wants to startup smart.
Your first lesson in copywriting 101: some of the best copy is relevant and resonant to the people reading it. It speaks to their pains and frustrations, their hopes and dreams, their patterns and habitual behaviours. It uses the language they use, answers their objections before they can even think them, and appeals to their buying decisions.
Speaking from experience, I started booking more of my dream clients when I got specific on who I wanted to work with, and did more research into the details of who they are!
So, before you write any copy, create a persona for your target customer:
This wouldn’t be copywriting 101 without some cheat codes! If you can’t figure out how to communicate the unique benefit you bring, use this formula:
“We help [target customer] achieve [desired outcome] by [unique method] so they can [ultimate benefit]”
Let’s give it a try with my value proposition ⬇️
“I help female entrepreneurs & BIPOC small businesses clarify their message, captivate their audience, and sell their stuff with research-fuelled, personality rich, high-converting copy with a storyselling focus.”
Now, it may take you a few tries to really hone in on the best value proposition—so A/B test a few options until you land on the best-performing one!
Next up in this copywriting 101 lesson: features vs. benefits. Features tell people what they get out of a product or service, but it’s the benefits that really sell it for you.
Now don’t get me wrong, it’s important to say that your digital workspace comes with 3 TB worth of storage and an AI chatbot with the free version.
But it’s even better to say “Carry everything that matters and answers to all your questions in the palm of your hand.”
So, when listing out all the features of your offer (what it does), and the advantage (how it works), you can get to the benefit (what that means for the customer).
Next up in copywriting 101 for the startup founder: sales psychology.
Our brains are lazy and constantly inundated with information—so they like to rely on hacks to get through the day.
Like customer reviews, statistics, and brand logos to help us decide whether we should trust you.
Certifications, awards, and media mentions that tell us you’re credible.
Money-back guarantees, free trials, and FAQs to reverse any risk people associate with buying your stuff.
And urgency and scarcity that tell us to ACT NOW—however, you want to use this ethically, in moderation.
Psychological techniques used here: Social proof (number of leading organizations that trust them) and client success data
So whenever you write something, you have to use psychological techniques like the ones mentioned above to help validate your claim.
For example, when you want to prove that people like your products, use customer reviews and UGC.
When you want to prove that you’re a credible authority, you can use media mentions, certifications, experience & expertise badges, and content that leans into the E-E-A-T rules that Google lives by (more on that in next week’s blog post).
A website is ESSENTIAL for startups and small businesses, because it’s one of the first thing’s people search for when looking into a brand. So having a website can:
You can check out this post from the Storytella Studios© Copy Blog for all the essential web pages your site needs, but if we’re getting down to brass tacks:You need to cover the above-the-fold essentials. This is anything at the top of the web page that a reader sees before scrolling—otherwise known as your hero section. It should have a headline, subheadline, hero image, CTA. You need ALL these elements, and they have to be good.
Here’s an example from my own website:
Speaking of, you want to nail your headline. If your hero section is the most importnat piece of real estate on your web page, the headline should be the staple piece that captures everyone’s eyes and encourages them to explore. Think problem + solution + outcome = a killer headline.
Your navigation copy should also be clear, customer-focused, so your site visitor can clearly get to where they need to go.
And just how we mentioned leveraging psychology in your copy—like social proof—you want to be strategic with where you put it. Like, should a testimonial go right below the hero section? Or above the final CTA at the bottom of the page (trick question: it can be both, if you have enough social proof 😉 ).
Whether you’re a service provider or a product brand, you want to create a through line from what your target audience is going through to them buying your product or service. If you follow this framework, you’ll have a product/service page that does its job:
Client problem → the solution → offer features → offer benefits → proof → CTA
Here’s an example:
You don’t NEED a newsletter… but given that email newsletters give small businesses an estimated $36 for every $1 spent, and that they outperform social media by an insane degree when it comes to customer acquisition, I’d say it’s a VERY good idea to have one.
You can email subscribers once a week, and give them more value than what you share on social media. Or share your journey, exciting milestones, or what’s new and happening in your business.
But no matter what, make sure you have:
Where you show up online, and how, is VITAL in this social-first era that thrives on storytelling and community.
Where should you show up? Ask your favourite search engine to discover the best social media channels to help achieve your goals.
Want to build your authority and credibility, get clients, and expand your network? LinkedIn and Facebook groups are great for that. Whereas Instagram, Pinterest, and YouTube or awesome for brand awareness, value-driven education, entertainment & inspiration-focused content, and community building.
Wherever you plan to show up, you want to be strategic about it:
Optimization is a recurring copywriting 101 topics—but for now, I want to focus on mobile optimization. 96% of people go on the web from their phones (Data Reportal), so there’s a good chance they’ll be looking at your website and content from a mobile device. So you’ll want to optimize for that!
Listen, you have to make a $1 out of 15 cents as a startup founder, so I get needing to find free tools and resources wherever you can. So, here are my favourites:
The final consideration in this copywriting 101 is knowing when to hold ’em… and when to fold ’em.
Money is a big concern when you’re a startup—but sometimes, you need to invest in external help, even if it’s hard to part with your funds. Other times, you can keep doing it yourself with the right tools and support! So how do you know when it’s the right time to hire a copywriter?
If you have a limited budget, don’t have many copy needs, and want to actually learn how to write killer copy, then keep going on the DIY train!
However, if you have complex sales funnels, high-stakes launches, and don’t have the time to write all the copy you’ll need to make everything go off hitch-free… then I’d say you should hire a copywriter.
I hope you enjoyed this copywriting 101 lesson! Remember that copy is a vital part of your startup’s online presence. It’s just as important as branding or web design or funding.
And you’re not alone in this. I’m here to help you!
I’m Jemilla Mills-Smith: Copywriter, Content Creator, and Social Media Coordinator.
For the past 5 years, I’ve been:
I love writing for female entrepreneurs and BIPOC-led brands. Energizing them to go big with their bold ideas so they can step into the next era of their business with confidence.
You’re next, babes!