In the past 4 years, I’ve cut my teeth strategizing & writing award-worthy, revenue-increasing, results-snatching copy. And what really lights my fire is writing for woman-owned and BIPOC-led brands. I’m talkin’ the first day after a braiding appointment type of excited! Energizing them to go big with their bold ideas so that when launch time happens, the world thinks “OMG FINALLY, I’ve been waiting for something like this.” And giving them the tools to diversify the market.
Your website’s hero section is like your elevator pitch, made digital. It’s the first thing people see when they land on your page, and let me tell you — you’ve got about 5 seconds to make them want to stick around longer than their ex’s Instagram stories 👀
According to a 2024 study by Nielsen Norman Group, website visitors spend 57% of their viewing time above the fold. What’s more, your target SEO keyword (you know, the thing that gets you noticed by search engines like Google and shows up on the first page of search results?) should also be in your hero section. Whether that be in the copy, the URL slug, or the ALT text of your hero section image.
That means your hero section needs to work harder than your playlist during a hot girl walk.
But don’t stress! I’m about to put you on game with everything you need to know about creating a hero section that converts like crazy.
Think of your hero section like the perfect outfit — you need all the right pieces to make it work! Here’s what you absolutely cannot skip:
1. Your Headline
Your headline should:
2. Body Copy
Keep it short but make it count! You only have 0.05 seconds to make your first impression. Which is why your body copy should:
3. Call-to-Action (CTA)
According to Hubspot’s 2024 research, personalized CTAs convert 202% better than default versions. Make it:
4. Visual Element (The Vibe Check)
Whether it’s an image, GIF, or portfolio reel, make it:
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The Optional-But-Worth-It Elements:
Let me show you how I levelled up some hero sections.
Version 1 (Before):
Version 2 (After):
Why version 2 works better:
Home Page Hero:
Services Page Hero:
The strategy here? Different pages, different goals:
If you’re looking at your hero section right now thinking “this ain’t it,” I got you! Book a 90-minute intensive with me and we’ll:
The investment? Just $420 to get copy that converts better than before.